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Friday, November 5, 2021

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7 comments:

  1. Hi Alister,
    Ruru was so lucky to get to go on camp to Living springs, and to have so many cool activities to do. Have you been rock climbing before? You were so close to succeeding at mt cook! Great effort! You certainly can be very proud of yourself!
    Nice one Alister!

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  2. Hi Alister,
    I think that you'r writing is very inspiring really tells me what you did at camp! i hope you had a good time with 600 dollars very lucky.Hope you had a great time at camp!

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  3. hi alister
    i like how you put a pic
    i thought the all around the wold was fun too
    maybe next time add some more words but thats cool

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  4. Hi Alister, Wow you did do well on the climbing wall, Mount Cook looked impossible to me. Although your favourite activities were the zipline and swimming you haven't told me much about them, I would love to hear more. I'm so glad you enjoyed camp Alister, it was so much fun. Michelle

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  5. Kia Ora Alister,
    I liked The rock climbing as well,
    I found Mt cook a little bit easy.
    Maybe next time make sure you have full stops and commers.
    Maybe describe what Mt cook was.
    Have a good rest of your day!

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  6. hi Alister you did so good at rock climbing but in your writing be for you post it maybe check your spellingbe for
    -Laila

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